(Meaningful street)
The middle of the street was amazing place I had seen ever, when our family vacation trip to Dallas downtown last summer. I feel enjoy as much as having a million dollar, eye sparkling , and family laughing while we climb on the Buffaloes statues and laugh like children playing outside. We went to restaurant for hunting fresh pizza and super cool orange juice mixture ice, we enjoy our food just a moment. Continue to walk, holding a huge camera and iphone5 to take picture, it's really heavy for me. My brother shoot video as children playing under water falling from five feet high separately,the Buffaloes standing on the green field without swaying their tails, and people surrounding hustle a place of John Kennedy death.
The end of the day our trip after seeing the place of John Kennedy death, I am nervous to see approximately a hundred of people cycling the street. They're shooting video and taking picture with their family at the exact place of John Kennedy death, blocking cars, traffic jam with people holding their own wife and kids leading to different direction. One of the old man has been almost accident by car because he stuck on looking that people cycle. We're walking through the whole town under sun hot all day long, we saw many different kind of race, including Chinese , black, India and also white foreign people who were flying from their own country to see john Kennedy death place too. I saw the shortest people like two feet height, fattest people like five hundred pound, skinny people as thin as the stick, and the youngest to the oldest like a month old and hundred years old. Even lame, blind and homeless people were on the street begging for some food and money.
John Kennedy death was in 1963 almost four decade ago, he sing to people heart. One old man hold up the poster with kennedy photo and big name, conducting 100 people to promote Kennedy . I feel like they demonstrate about the way he got killed, because even His photo sticking on news paper that day, day of wonderful vacation on summer had been great experience to me. To see the central of the street was misery for everyone, understanding how a great people surviving After their body had die . AWSOME.
John Kennedy death was in 1963 almost four decade ago, he sing to people heart. One old man hold up the poster with kennedy photo and big name, conducting 100 people to promote Kennedy . I feel like they demonstrate about the way he got killed, because even His photo sticking on news paper that day, day of wonderful vacation on summer had been great experience to me. To see the central of the street was misery for everyone, understanding how a great people surviving After their body had die . AWSOME.
Lian, I know you are trying hard, and using literary devices and higher-level vocabulary is a challenge. You do some of that well here; however, you also have many many errors in your basic sentence structure. That is where we need to start: we must get your sentences correct. 2
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