He born in rural town with poverty family,and his place doesn't offer opportunities to rich. The world rude to him on his childhood lifetime , because he can't go to school, but lian had a chance to get oppoturnity also, at fourteen age. He leaves his family behind , and approching for Malaysia , the place of better earned wage and easier job. However Lian could learn education to be rich, although his childhood life did not allow education available. Because he came to live in America by refugees after two years later he been working in Malaysia, and lian had a dream to going to college too.
Before I write my go world story, the past experience of in my life remind me especially than other thing else, I summarized instead of too long and my mind consider the most worst thing that almost destroyed my career make me prefer to write and exposed to other people because I think my life had the most conflict in the world.
While writing draft of story, the words came to my mind without thinking, I try to used the better words to describe my story, but the reason that coming in my hearts seem to be the best. I am not pretending to write the stories , so the exactly word come easily from my life experience .
To write my own stories isn't really struggle with me because I am not writing about my friend,my hand is not the writer neither my head, priority experience wrote itself. I write five draft in summarized and the last draft make the theme.
I got plenty of feedback from other students, they comments my stories on note card during I read front of classes, theirs comment really make me prove how i grammar and choosing higher word also because each student complain on what I struggle thing with writing strong essay.
I create the video after all finishing writing story and finding appropriately picture for the story, I processing with writing story, finding picture, considering the best way to edit and downloading editor. All those were processing two day with other homework.
I am not really happy with finishing my video, and the editor that I used couldn't impress because there is no chance to work at home, my problem with wifi, and homework. I didn't do well doing at free time and during block lunch.
My nerves and excitement position exactly the same to showing in class, but unfortunately my teacher didn't show us because the time doesn't offer opportunities for showing all student video. I am not happy with that.
Where do you analyze the process of writing your story and creating your video? That was the task. All I see here is a summary of your story. --
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